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 No.27825[Last 50 Posts]

This will be sort of crossover hub for all my series and random short scenes that i am willing to make but don't have any good justification.
Characters from diffrent series can meet and interact here as well.

Some form of role playing is possible if you make a reasonably detailed request or play your own character. Any kind of content is allowed including consensual and non consensual. (as long as it is not too complex to create.) you should somehow identify yourself when making request to track continuity of your messages

In this story you are exploring the town during the festival attend various events and meet various people and talk with them.

My other series will continue as well

Cheerleader club https://www.gurochan.cx/3dcg/res/26831.html

First series https://www.gurochan.cx/3dcg/res/9079.html

Holiday events https://www.gurochan.cx/3dcg/res/26159.html

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I started using Clip Studio for speech and effects. It makes adding text a bit easier.

What do you think she is going to meet now ?

 No.27839

It's getting really nice, I'm curious about more ideas!

 No.27840

Futanari frying her own severed genitals?

 No.27859

>>27840
Same as before? or you mean some new futanari? (since those tho probably don't have cocks anymore LOL) But OK, that will happen later a bit later.

 No.27863

Would love for her to venture in a 'stuck in the wall' tent in this great festival. Will surely be there myself. It features three girls, each stuck in a wall in the middle of the tent, their lower and upper bodies protruding on both sides of the wall. Secured on their back with their legs wide spread, or on standing arched over, their asses up. They will not be able to foresee what is about to happen to their lower body, but for those visitors who favor eye-contact the 'upper body'-side provides lots of sporting opportunities, with breasts, nipples and ring-gagged mouths available. Their arms are obviously firmly secured. On both sides torture instruments like whips, dildos, needles, etc at hand. She might want to lend me a hand?

(hope this fits your 'reasonable detailed' standard, Onix? And if my request is too difficult or outlandish, don't bother. I love the series already!)

 No.27871

>>27863
Yes, that's all fine ;)
I hope you do not absolutely insist on the exact concrete wall and something with the same functionality will be ok since this is not usual accident/trap but deliberate setting also, hands will be left free for story purposes ;)
finally, do you prefer very highly willing girls who fight for who gets most attention or the reluctant type who try to divert your attention to each other. I think later will be preferable for more interesting story.

 No.27886

Thanks for wanting to explore this Onix. On your points, the exact materials of which the wall is made is yours to chose. It obviously should be sturdy. And my preference, in line with yours, would indeed be for the girls to be quite unwilling to undergo the treatment they are subjected to. They will be most relieved if the girl next to them is tortured instead of them. Obviously, as the festival might attract a lot of men, it is likely that heir relief is shortlived.

 No.27889

This Project went a bit too far on its scale. record breaking numbers of characters hairstyles and outfits in the single scene. (and still growing, need to add men with big dicks) most characters are somewhat single use so no need for any torture limits no problem if they die just use next one. I just hope I will not run out of memory.

>>27886
It seems that you will have a bit more than 3 girls after all. Your idea grew up in to the modern art exhibition LOL

There will be some more girls encased in the concrete blocks in various poses also available for other kind of use. But you will need to bring your own tools from the other place.
You should not vandalize their art too much LOL or police may come ;)

 No.27890

That sounds excellent. Am sure some even the tools the police would bring would come handy too. It might not be too difficult to convonce them to lemd a hand. A tazer to a girl's clitoris, a baton in her tight ass, so many possibilities.

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It took quite some time to pull out half decent dialogue for those pictures LOL I hope it is not too stupid.

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Unfortunately My daz3d crashed and I lost like 2 hours of work. It takes ages to load and save the scene so i took some time to add text to older pictures.

I had to remake some of the art exhibition scene. Everything is almost ready, but now I need to add some extra characters to interact with living statues. So those series are taking quite a long time to start.

I may continue my other series in this setting as well.

 No.27914

Too bad to hear your PC crashed losing valuable work… Nice police-ladies, hope they are quite incompetent, so they will be tortured themselves instead of freeing Drabok's girls. Darla needs some heavy treatment still. By the way, looking forward to the first exhibits!

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Finally all this huge setting finished
Now I wonder if it was worth it.
Now I just need to think what to do with them LOL

23 characters in one scene and some more coming later

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So, now we can look around check on the girls and talk with them or whatever else.
Tell me where you want to go.

(By the way she is a real person ;)

 No.27956

Love the scenes. Including all details, e.g., the girls to the left where the upper girls pony tails are encased in concrete holding her head up. Could you post details of that part of the scene (the slab with the two girls) from both sides? And I would propose, if that is not too much work, then inserting some large objects in some of their orifices. Thanks for the great work!

 No.27958

I do not have any more pictures made yet, so I will render them later.

As for sticking objects in their orifices, we need to visit that tent to get something stickable :)
It is not too much work that's why they are placed here ;)

I did not totally decided how that happens as if this should be done by adults teenagers or little lolis fooling around doing silly things to those girls.
Currently the plan is that adults will be mostly about rape and sex. teenagers about bullying and torture.
and lolis about silly stupid things no normal person would think to do.

 No.27983

Love your work Onix, and look forward to how you're going to fill up these girls or do worse.

On a different note, as you asked for suggestions: how about a slave girl auction? The girls sold would be made available for a torture session of choice to their buyers for 2 hours each. And at the end of the day, as the festival ends, a final sale where all girls are sold for permanent use by their purchasers who can take them home.

As part of the first auction it would be lovely to have a scene that resmbles this: nude lolis and teens, in groups of three on small podia, shackled with their hands high to a pole in the middle of each podium.

There are so many slave auction scenes in 3D, but always of old hags with big udders. You would be the first artist, as far as I know, to fill this gap.

 No.27989

>>27983
Slave auction at this festival? LOL :)
I wonder who is going to be that stupid to pay when there are plenty of girls around available for free.
Maybe they sell them with a big discount? or do it as some charity auction? ;)

But anyway, this is an excellent idea. I can do it, I just need to think of some action what would be happening there.
What do you think should happen with those slaves as who will be buyers?

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2 kids got interested in the modern art.

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>>27956
No large objects yet, but you will never guess what will happen next LOL

 No.28000

Was a bit distracted by those lovely ladies being fist fucked. And, no, no clue what will haappen next. Will they be whipped?

Back to the slave auction, you have a point indeed. All the free sex around.. Charity sounds like a great idea. Maybe for a girl orphanage? Am quite sure, by the way, that some buyers would love to acquire a few slaves for use at home. On the action, as you ask, was thinking of:
- girls standing on the podia to be shackled on ankles and wrists, plus collared, some ball gagged
- a special lbox with clamps, needles, dildos, whips, floggers, electric shockers is given as a bonus for every girl sold. The girls are made aware of the content of this box, adding to their excitement
- as a starter one girl is being tied standalone, hands above her head, shackled to a chain from above, being whipped. This is to arouse the audience and increase the sales price
- midway thenauction another girl is taken to this place in the middle of the auction, chained likewise, raised in the air. A pole with a huge dildo is positioned below her and she is slowly lowered onto this dildo as the bidding around her continues

Hope this provides further inspiration to add to your artistic talents!

 No.28005

the girl on top will be having a piss or a shit on the kids?

 No.28006

PLEASE: No Shit or Piss !!!!!
This is a great work. Please dont destroy it with Shit or Piss :(

 No.28007

>>28005
i was considering something like that but no. LOL

>>28006
I can understand dislike for shit but what the hell is wrong with pee?

It is not gonna happen soon but I have some plans for separate scene that involves this stuff where girls are "working" in the public toilet.

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Kids playing with the statue

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Ok Now I will do some work on that slave market stuff. later kids may return to play with statues some more or someone else may come and use them.

Also there is going to be special performance as mentioned with some real guro.

What do you suggest to do first?

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another angle

 No.28034

Love the lolis playing with the statues. The pole is a nice addition to the scene, good they left it in the girl. If we want to go more guro here, you might consider whipping some of the girls or providing them with outsized impalements.

Thinking of impalements, how about a completely different scene, a small lane connecting two exhibitions, where in this lane 6 girls are displayed in a row, each one dangling with their legs tied spread wide with their anus above some monstrosity of a fallus (big, knobbed, ..) where the visitors to the festival can play a little game with a girl using a small computer screen. They both are asked a few knowledge questions (eg the year Napolean died) where they clearly state the answer. The girl tied up gets a 1 point advantage over the visitor on a series of 4 question. If she loses the series in points the computer lowers her 5 centimeters.

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The last girl getting in her place on the statue exhibition

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Ok, now when exhibition part is finished we can check that torture tent or I can try to build slave market

 No.28056

The torture tent first please, am quite sure the girls to be auctioned in the slave market will not be allowed to run away. They undoubtedly want to, as their fate is too horrible to contemplate. I imagine their slave owners are temporarily holding them in a slave pit, basically a big metal cage (some 8 meter diameter). From there they are transfered to the auction podia in groups of three and sold. This secured position means you have time to show us the torture tent, the screams of the girls from that tent already drew our attention!

 No.28057

The slave market pleeeaase!

 No.28058

Time for a litte torture…
At the slave market you can later "sell" maybe later a few tortured "visitors" of this Festival. Or bodyparts of them…

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So let's make a quick look here

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 No.28076

Just an introduction what you will see.
Now i will go back to other series for some time and also gradually start building slave market scene.

 No.28078

Also, can show us the fountain girls part?

 No.28079

>>28078
You will see that scene during that performance, and then there will be also more action with statues.

 No.28137

hope the one in blue boots with the huge tits gets snuffed for her tit meat, would love to see those bags get eaten while she still alive to feel every bite

 No.28142

had an ideal for a special type snuff little girls having overly sized milk filled breasts walking around in lewd undersized bikinis to designate them for sex and then being willing meat for anyone to cook or eat alive (preference is live eating esp. sucking milk and eating of nipples and breasts

 No.28151

>>28137
Girls who already have some role will not get snuffed because that would mess up the setting.

but there is no limit of how many other girls are available so quite a lot of them will get snuffed. The only problem is that making snuff action scene is quite a lot of work as it requires quite a lot of pictures.

>>28142
You mean big breasted lolis?
I will keep that in mind for BBQ event.

 No.28157

> I will keep that in mind for BBQ event.
The Big Breast Quest event? I like the sound of that…

Nice work as always, Onix! Can't wait for more!

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>>28142
I wonder if you had that kind of oversize breasts in mind ?

 No.28164

What lovely girls in the tent. What indeed was done to their asses? Probably not something too horrible, as they could extend their hands and feel? If it would be me who left them there, they would not escape so lightly. Lucky girls!

 No.28166

yeah about those sizes are lovely for eating

 No.28192

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Some more concept art: Snuff bunny farm/family
Loosely related to the My Little Pony episode mlp.fandom.com/wiki/Swarm_of_the_Century
except that those cute bugs are replaced with cute lolis who grow fast, easily get pregnant or impregnate anyone.
So plenty of material to play in all ways.

The problem now is that we already have huge world but not really that much hardcore content yet LOL And I still have more concept ideas.

 No.28193

I propose a place where women, lolis, men and shota can go to have sex, torture, kill or die; but the place is accessed with a brand / badge / tattoo that indicates that they want to be tortured, killed, etc. or a mixture of preferensias example: sex while torturing / torturing while I have sex; those who choose to die their parts can be profaned (sexually) or blessed in a carniseria with a photo of who was

 No.28198

This could also be for the bbq ebento or for the slave market, I leave it to your discretion

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 No.28250

>>28192
Just found this new series of yours and I'm super hyped already! Great idea; a torture festival is the best scenario I can think of!

It appears that we have a lot of fetishes in common so I thought I might help you with some inspiration mixed with personal wishes:
-instead of gentle vanilla pussy fisting, please include a scene where a girl is getting far up the butt, really far, elbow deep or if she is being fisted by kids then make them dive in there up to their shoulder resulting in the girl's belly bulging as their colon is being stretched to new levels
-tied up girl sitting on a dildo or plug with her butt, visitor comes, grabs her by the shoulders and mercylessly pushes her down resulting in her asshole and intestines being destroyed (maybe add spikes to dildo)
-girl is tied up and visitors stick needles and screws in and through her, they even stick them right into her eyes
-girl is trapped in safety glass cube, above her is a piston which lowers further onto her as a mechanism gets activated. Alt: visitors can climb on top of the cube's cover to crush the girl with their body weight
-girl is tied down with solid steel ties in either doggy or missionary position, to her butt there is a machine which has drum with an extremely long colon snake rolled onto it. As a mechanism gets triggered, the machine further pushes the impossible long colon snake into her rectum, through her colon. At some point her belly is very bulged from meters of colon snake being shoved into her intestines (btw what do you think of all-the-way-through dildo/tube insertions? unrealistic?)
-girl has big and small snakes inserted into all her body's openings
-girl gagged with anal beads down her throat
-girl gets double dildo shoved down her throat (mouth taped?) and chokes from it
-btw did you know that you can insert a tube into a humam's nose and it'll come out the mouth? that'd make for a cool bondage ring to attach chains
-I like the bondage pose where a girl has all her libs spread apart with ropes so that the torturer has good access to all her body

Can't wait to see more!
pls pls include some deep anal fisting

 No.28254

>>28250
LOL let me guess, you are an engineer.

While I totally like your ideas, but some of them require considerable amount of mechanical engineering and it cannot be developed into any story or dialogue. so it woud be better to achieve similar results without using complex technology.
Also tying girls in 3D is pain in the ass way harder than in 2D. when you need to position all those ropes and connect them properly. so bondage also should be used sparingly, and it is better to replace it with some other methods of immobilization if necessary.

By the way you did not mention what kind of reaction you woud like to see from those girls ;)

As for fisting, I think you will find enuogh of that on all my series.


>>28193
I will keep that in mind to brand girls appropriately. but putting entire description of what she is looking for in the tattoo or brand may be a bit impossible I guess we will need to use body writing for that.

 No.28276

>>28254
yup, completely forgot about the modelling process mb. And yeah, I've seen your fisting works and I LOVE them! That's why I'll be wishing for some deep anal fisting in future.

What I'd definitely enjoy to see is some more needle/nail/screw play as in your x-mas series; that's super hot. And I definitely want to see that 'masochist painslut'-cop be tortured!

As for reactions, I have to admit, that I only truly enjoy it, when they are visibly suffering and in great pain -that adds a very appealing, thrilling emotional aspect to it, which I find incredibly hot.

PS: I'm curious to see, what they have done to the left girl's butt.It appears there is a chain attached to it -maybe a spiked plug? An anal hook? Can't wait for updates!

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Fulfilling the wish for those who wanted to find out what happened to her but.

 No.28355

oh yeah, please include the equiptment to her left in further pics. Would love seeing her her cute body function as pincushion :) Bigger metal rods are very welcome! Poke her some extra holes

 No.28356

Your latest images are great! I love the butt hook idea. YOu could use this method to hold girls in different positions and tie them up. That was is looking pretty good as well, very well made!

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 No.28372

>>28355
Things on the table are not absolutely relevant because much more that that is available.


>>28164
considering what >>28356 said about them being able to escape, i think there may be a chance to see her in some diffrent positions ;)

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 No.28387

>>28383
wow, that's beautiful! Great idea you had there; I love how creative you get during your stories.
And thank you for letting her suffer -that's what I wanna see when I look up guro! I'd love to see some more big rod insertions and even some smputations -maybe fingers? And of course more mutilation! Poking a girl's eye(s) out? Sawing one in two halves? Can't wait to see what you're doing to them next!

 No.28389

>>28383
with funnel hot asphalt fill in the ass! :D

 No.28401

Oh man, i can't wait to see more! Great work as always!

Could you do us a small fan service and post some images with a side-by-side 3D as well? (non-crossed-eye)? I'm trying some stuff with VR goggles and it would be nice to watch your story in 3D

 No.28402

Yes. Now torture her tits…

Maybe even cut one of them off?
And the other cut the nipple off and let her eat her own nipple?

 No.28417

Here I was thinking those girls are in a perfect position for gutting…

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 No.28429

By the way, >>28428 was supposed to have tears but they did not render for some reason.

 No.28438

>>28429
Yes, please! I love tears and black mascara running down her cheeks :) That's super cute and sexy.
And if you ask me, her tits deserve some more metal rods! Hole them like cheese!

 No.28441

like to see cindy the reporter kill the girl with pink hair and glasses, the one with the big tits, using the shiksabob needle she pushes one into the girls nipple straight down into the girls breast trying to pop the mammary gland to release the milk and blood, the doing the same to the other girls breast she pulls both needles out and squeezes the girls breasts tight drinking and sucking the girls nipples tasting the blood and milk before biting off both nipples and eating both breasts, the girl with pink hair actually loving wraps her arms around cindy's head as she eats

 No.28442

>>28438
You are so cruel LOL
Anyway, I think we finally need to give some attention to other girls. She already suffered enough.

I guess I will either do something with that art exhibition or work on other scenes that are not yet posted.

 No.28443

>>28441
Thanks for the suggestion,(or more like for an entire story)
but I will do that to other girls in another place( which is now being made ;)
I have different plans for those girls here ;)

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>>27983
Not finished yet, but here is also spoiler for you:
preliminary slave market scene.

There will be more girls later but do not expect everyone of then to get into action
Also for people who will make suggestion no killing or mutilations in the slave market we don't want to damage goods :)

Those who want to see really horrible things, wait for the performance on the statue exhibition.

 No.28454

That's fine!!! Looking forward to continue!!! Tell me, why the body of the smallest girl has traces of punishment or torture?

 No.28455

>>28445
Alright, I'd be cool, if the exhibited slaves were mother/daughter or siblings. To add an emotional level to this scene.
Also, are the potential buyers allowed to scan the goods? Outside AND inside?

 No.28459

Hello Onix.
Had there a suggestion.
In picture No.28428 the boy asks if she has already come.
In the next picture she could yell at him badly that she did NOT come.
As a raktion the boy says: that is a pity for you. But I can help you.
Then he goes behind her again and crushes her clitoris with a pair of pliers. Do not just cut off … slowly crush.

Then he goes back to the front and asks again if she has come :)

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 No.28464

>>28454
Actually all of them are supposed to have those whip marks because of the story. As those 3 women are typically insane and understand abuse as form of love so even if they suffer they want more of it.


Anyway, do not expect that much action in the slave market also for technical reasons. There are just too many characters in one scene and my computer is encountering problems. so we will need to move to less crowded places.

>>28455
they are siblings mother and 2 daughters. Put on the auction by the neighbor boy with whom they are in love. while her cuck husband is working far away to provide for them. LOL (Kinda NTR thing)
I hope this is not too much of emotional issues LOL

>>28459
Intereting :) I just got some other plans for her already.

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 No.28514

Very very promising, hope to see many small groups of delightful youngsters up for sale and subsequent torture

 No.28553

this is one interesting and promising project.

 No.28556

am I the only one who keeps checking this thread 10+ times a day?

 No.28569

>>28384
I hope the girl on the right with the big nipples will be sold on the slave auction, with some nice sets of nipples clamps. Would love to see her lovely face contorted in pain, begging in vain for me to release whatever I put on her extended nipples…

 No.28576

I love your style and stories.
As an idea, you may be able to use an ergometer in combination with an inflatable dildo. And then the girls ride their bicycles.

Show the public live the introduction of toys with an X-ray machine or similar.

 No.28606

File: 1555514384773.jpg (1.27 MB, 1440x1080, tf sm2.jpg)

Another group of slaves on the auction.
This time girls selling their classmates.


Unfortunately there is nothing much to do with those slaves staying on the slave auction topic (am not talking just about random tortures, but about something reasonable for this topic)
maybe some whipping and nipple torture.

 No.28616

>>28606 Hi Onix, What about after they've been sold? Their new owner could decide to emphasize his owner ship on the spot with some more radical measures.

Or at least they could be branded with the mark of their new owner.

 No.28617

I want the slave in latex catsuit! :)

 No.28618

>>28616
Yes, most of the action can happen after they get sold :)
But this kinda means individual story for every girl (or group of girls) outside of the slave market. Also it requires multiple extra characters as buyers what makes this story too complex.

>>28569
Those 3 are a bit "special".
Choose a girl from the later picture and decide what should be done to her assuming that you are there.

 No.28619

>>28617
LOL
She is kinda not a slave but one who is selling them :)
Maybe she will also go on sale eventually.

 No.28620

>>28618 But a branding or some other kind of marking could happen immediately in front of the stage. Yes you would have to introduce at least one more character as the buyer. But moving the camera to another angle so that not all the other slaves are visible you could also take two or more others out of the scene.

 No.28621

And thinking a bit more about the scenario: As this is a cultural torture fair (a very clever idea by the way) there is no real reason for a new owner, boy or girl, to take his new purchase away immediately. They could do whatever they want to do to them on the spot for the further amusement of the general public.

 No.28622

>>28620
Well that's possible ;)
I will just leave all branding process to the girls who are doing sales (they will kinda do customization and demonstration) while keeping buyers invisible.

I do not have any rendering problems with the number of characters in the scene but making new characters is extra work and it becomes problematic to make them different enough.

 No.28635

>>28622
Customization? Like a station where you can saw off their limbs right on the spot to make them a cute pet? Body mods? Picking eyes out?
I'm excited!

 No.28661

>>28635
Yes there will be that kind of stuff as well, Just not in the stage.

there will be some more stations. one of them for body mods of various kinds, but they are gonna be consensual and possibly even painless to be more casual ;) this will be combined shop for some interesting torture devices.

I think also we can add acupuncture service for stress relief LOL

There will be place for BBQ and also special girls available for cooking and other purposes.

Many of the things were planned just as events happening on the street.

However most of the stuff is going to be at least somewhat consensual since in theory any girl who is not willing to participate just need to wear a badge ;)

 No.28664

Those who want to see really horrible things, wait for the performance on the statue exhibition: Where is the statue exhibition? When does that happen? I'm so excited !!! you can find my art here: https://www.pixiv.net/member.php?id=10142647

 No.28667

>>28664
It starts here >>27952
and it will continue with more serious stuff.

 No.28668

I think if you enclose the living girl with a metal mesh and pour concrete, then I could put her in my garden and sometimes feed her. The toilet comes out of a pipe.
The other girls could also be covered!? :)

 No.28721

>>28667
A magic show would be cool as well! (mutilating and deadly magic show ofc)

 No.28723

>>28721

Yes there will be magic show as well
I think our crazy half girl from gurochan can be a star there.


But there are so may plans already that it is going to take long time to see them done

 No.28881

File: 1556580070855.jpg (1.72 MB, 1440x1080, tf1201.jpg)

Continuing with slave market scene

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 No.28899

wow! like the latexgirlie! :)

 No.28901

I notice that the auctioneers aren't wearing their badges. I wonders what will happen.

 No.28908

whipping how extremely vanilla….

 No.28918

>>28908
whipping how extremely vanilla….

Well then why don't you render up some chocolate or strawberry of your own and dazzle everyone with it hmmm??

 No.28924

>>28908
Do not worry it will not going to be very long I just want to decorate girls with whipmarks ;) before proceeding to the more serious stuff, even if all this slave market thing is not going to be that very extreme.

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 No.28947

great!!! …pity that she has no latex gloves on! :)

 No.28951

Nice! These soft little titties were ust made to be pierced!

 No.28955

>>28951
By the way this time it is a bit diffrent kind of piercing than usual ;)
I wonder if anyone will notice

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 No.29018

File: 1557016891126.jpg (1.44 MB, 1440x1080, tf1223.jpg)

So this is how one of the slaves got new piercings.

Now we have one more girl left with nothing what should we do to her?

1 Give her nipple piercings as well (without detailed action)
2 give her some kind of branding.
3 both of above
4 make your own suggestion, but it has to be simple. because we will move to another scene soon and later we may come back to this

 No.29020

A branding would be great.

 No.29021

File: 1557017800314.jpg (200.84 KB, 378x890, BlossomSkewered10.jpg)

skewer her ass cheeks with 4 skewers. 2 one way 2 the other way

 No.29024

>>29021
Hi, I totally don't mind to make an entire story with butts being skewered just for you. but not those girls on the stage now because it does not fit the context of the slave market in any way and will mess up things.

If you are interested, tell more details about what kind of setting you want and preferably some kind of reason why this is happening. maybe you want some performance on stage with girls skewering each other butts for you ;) or maybe you have some other ideas?

by the way not sure if you noticed but I did some butt skewering here already
>>28379
maybe just not exactly according your specifications but pretty close ;)

 No.29042

number three or/and cunt piercing!

 No.29044

File: 1557066104865.png (2.06 MB, 2072x1004, comp1.png)

>>29018
Last girl is a very lucky one because she gets a big tongue piercing/ (or tongue cut in the middle?)

btw I approve Buttlover's idea; skewers are awesome! I wouldn't let them butt exclusive though. Lay a girl on a table or let her hang on her hands then stick multiple skewers into all her limbs, belly etc. Maybe even through her skull. I think they can survive that for quite some time as long you don't pull'em out.

 No.29053

>>29044
This is not a very good context to do such thing.

But since you are making suggestions without thinking about context and plot that I just cant fit in the current story I decided to do Guro fashion show on this festival which will be perfect reason for all kinds of stupid and crazy things.

Let's call it Gurovision (same as Eurovision) until someone will suggest better name or I will think about something

This way it will be easier to do your requests and maybe you later can vote for the winner.

Now I will just finish this slave market scene and we can move to something else

 No.29060

>>29053
Your Gurovision Contest idea is genius!

I can already imagine it: There is a big stage where candidats perform their torture show. And the best thing about it is, that the most brutal, painful and inhumain yet creative execution will win. This is the place where you'll find live skewering, amputations, impaling, severing, pulling teeth, nails, eyes etc.

That'd make for a super interesting event when people here are allowed to inspire the performances

 No.29065

File: 1557092581156.jpg (1.56 MB, 1440x1080, tf1224.jpg)

So it will be just plain branding this time until someone will come to buy those slaves later.

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 No.29070

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Ok
I guess that will be all of the slave market and >>27983 request for now. I may come back when there will be some need to buy slave girls. If anyone has some easy and interesting suggestion for one more picture, I could also do one more branding on her front but probably we can leave it as is.

I think the next scene will be with those girls in concrete slabs. So things are going to get more serious.

Other scenes upcoming later are BBQ place (With Big breasted lolis), Snuff Bunny girls, and Gurovision fashion contest on the stage which will include some guro magic show and other stage events.

 No.29078

>>29070
Magic show sounds awesome! It's a shame that most magic show 3d work ends with the halved/holed assistant magically stepping unharmed out of the device.
I'm very excited to see what your magic show will be like. If I may request something, then that there will be one performence where a girl has multiple metal rods stuck through her entire body. And it should be very thrilling and life threatening with a rod right through her belly button, one next to heart and lungs, one above her eye exiting the back of her skull etc. I'm sure you'll be creative as always! :)

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 No.29089

File: 1557194527604.jpg (1.6 MB, 1440x1080, tf1234.jpg)

I decided that we need some better ending after all. so made few more pictures to end slave market scene on the good mood

So this offcislly completes this scene for now and I can unload it from DAZ.

 No.29090

>>29078
yes I can do something like that , but I am just thinking how to make it look like a magic show to actually have some "magic" context and not just plain guro where girls get mutilated;)
And most important, I wonder if you will understand what is happening ;)

 No.29108

File: 1557277557583.jpg (1.61 MB, 1440x1080, TFf1300.jpg)

So here goes next scene:

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File: 1557277905467.jpg (1.2 MB, 1440x1080, TFf1307.jpg)

And here I will leave you waiting in the most dramatic moment LOL

 No.29121

great scene. I hope she is wrapped in concrete and as a statue forever! :D

 No.29147

Wow! …and the next …? :)

 No.29151

You should see it later today. ;)

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 No.29179

File: 1557453319488.jpg (1.25 MB, 1440x1080, TFf1323.jpg)

So now it is up to you to suggest what to do with those girls in concrete slabs.

And in that time I will go back to my older series.

 No.29181

Can any of them be used as toilets?
Peeing in one of their mouths looks feasible

 No.29185

Maybe stick the cut off arms into the holes of another "statue". One in pussy and one in ass.

At another you can cut off one nipple, then plug out an eye and then put the eye in the hole of the tit and the nipple at the eye socket.

 No.29186

I want to see curious visitors removing their eyes as souvenir.

The girls standing on the poles near the entrance should lose their arms too.

 No.29187

One of them could be cut in half

 No.29189

Here are some ideas that come to my mind when looking at the full picture:

- The Venus statue:
seems to be the perfect target for all sorts of "projectiles" and "targeting practice". There could be competitions / bets between guests trying to hit the best spots on the target. Some weapons that come to mind:
- airsoft guns
- darts
- blow-pipes
- arrows
..etc

- The two impaled girls at the front:
The way they are facing each other they seem perfect for any sort of competition between them.

- The blond girl arched over backwards:
If any girl is getting cut in half, she seems in the perfect position, cutting from pussy upwards towards belly and so on.

- The "Water Feature"
I would like to see how the girls in the background were "installed" as water fountain. Maybe they tell the story as flashback when the reporter asks them.

- Other Ideas:
It would be fun to see a girl wanting to escape her position, to join the fun on the other girls. (Maybe the other girls insulted her..?)
To get free she asks a friend to "cut her loose"

 No.29221

I support the nipple<->eye-swap idea as well as the toilet (as long as we go for "pissing only")

as i'm a fan of nipple stretching/insertions: We could also just plug an eye into a stretched nipple…

for the girl with the red hair: she looks like a perfect candidate for a spit action. put a long pole into her mouth/ass and let it go through the (w)hole body

for the girl holding her breasts: i think she could use another pair… so why not cut them off from a girl and sew them to her

looking forward for what will finally happen. Nice work as always, onix!

 No.29235

That's quite a lot of ideas.

But I think i will not do them right now after all, and focus on the "gurovision" contest instead( while occasionally coming back to other scenes when appropriate by context.)

 No.29245

+1 throwing, shooting stuff at the venus. maybe arrows, darts through tits?

+1 cutting out eyes. Any face cutting/modification. (maybe cutting the entire lower jaw if possible?)

And have girls ask, beg for it. it must get boring having to be a statue :) make them compete for attention.

 No.29254

Some shoulder deep anal fisting for humiliation. Followed by rods through the girl's body

 No.29289

Onix you are a true artist. You and Drabok are my favorites. I can't wait for more of the Slave Market story.

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 No.30108

Sometimes implying or hinting is better than explicit. Also, willingness to be a victim is a big turn on.

Expand on what the police woman said. Have a tent in the background called the raping grotto (or something). Don't show us what happens in there, but show us a queue or girls, and some women too, waiting to enter. Have speech bubbles where they describe what they hope for:
-I hope they slit my throat, rape it, and throw me in a ditch.
-I hope they cut my hands off and punch me in the face repeatedly, before gang raping
me.

Also, a hot dog stand would be excellent. A line of men and boys waiting for the girls to cut off their cocks, cook them on the BBQ and then serve them back to them (or others) in a bun. Make the boys eager and willing. Add a couple of adult men (gym teacher, visiting German TA, etc.)

For the slave market, how about someone buys a slave just to take her to the parking lot, have her syphon gas out of a car, and self immolate with it.

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 No.32279

>>30108
Yes, I have similar ideas about just implying things too ;)
It was actually my intent, in the beginning, do to it a lot.
and make it as a collection of small stories as you suggest

But it ran out of control when I introduced a lot of characters.

I now need to do some cleanup of the story and reduce the number of characters.

Also at this time, I decided to try some story writing along with 3d
You can check it here. >>17249

 No.32338

This is lots of fun! I love the girls in concrete as living sculptures - kinda reminds me of a fantasy I had about making statues but using living girls as molds. Are you expecting them to survive the experience or will they willingly die there?

 No.32339

>>32338
I see nobody noticed that this whole setting is a variant of the live performance which was done by one performance artist. where people were also given a right to do whatever them and with her but nobody really hurt her. this time it is an entire class of girls offering themselves to the public.

Some of them will die some, some will receive injuries of various severity.
The main idea is not death, but girls getting into a very risky situation with unknown outcome offering themselves as material for amateur artists.
Kinda similar as your meat girls LOL

 No.32346

Ah yes I heard an interview with her on the radio. There were plenty of options for nice things they could have done to her but too but nearly everyone opted to be cruel just because they could. She said their look of horror when she stood up and walked towards the onlookers at the end of the hour (or however long it was) was quite telling!

I do love their Vulnerability!

 No.32399

Truly enjoyed your work, Onix! Looking forward to seeing more.

 No.32403

>>32399
I hope I will be able to get back to it soon.

 No.35053

You advertised a BBQ event. Is it still valid?

 No.37376

Onix has left the building……

 No.37501

File: 1583034258536.jpg (515.69 KB, 1600x1200, es1.jpg)

Just to show you that i didn't forget gurochan.
Not sure on which thread to post it but probably here will be most appropriate.

 No.37502

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This is the 3d version of the story by this artist
https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/79103125

 No.37503

File: 1583034695562.jpg (923.22 KB, 1600x1200, es2a.jpg)

Nothing much yet, just character test

 No.37512

>>37503
Great to see a sign of life. Onix didn't really leave the building after all.
'Nothing much yet'??
This image has 'Onix' written all over it!
Very curious about the continuation; it looks very, very promissing.

 No.37516

>>37501
I found you on pixiv and am following you there as well. Hopefully, I can keep up with your work one place or the other.

 No.37526

>>37503
You can do spectacularly terrific works on the line of bas999.

 No.37534

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So lets bump this thread a bit

 No.37535

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Now you have to wait until she comes back.

 No.37536

This story will be made in FPV (POV) format like Bas999

 No.37538

>>37534
Does she have a name yet?

 No.37539

>>37538
she is supposed to be the same girl from that comic but looks like she doesn't have any name so you can try to give some

 No.37540

>>37539
What about 'Dionaea' (see wikipedia), shortened to 'Dione'?

 No.37541

>>37539
'Dione' is also a derivative of the Greek name 'Theia', which means 'queen of the heavens'; the aledged mother of Aphrodite……..

 No.37542

Is that a skybox used for the room? It doesn't look right at all.

 No.37543

>>37542
I am not sure about the term "skybox" but yes this is a flat HDRI environment so it gets deformed a bit. but I decided to ignore that because it renders 10 times faster than a full 3d room.

>>37541
I wonder how is that name fits for this girl who is supposed to be worst of all ;)
because considering who she is probably her name should be Lucy aka female version of Satan, (Lucifer)

 No.37544

>>37543
That certainly beats a meat eating plant I was referring to…….

 No.37548

>>37543
A bit? To be honest it looks weird as fuck.
I like the concept of eating a baby though.
But why doesn't she look pregnant at the start of the story?

 No.37549

>>37548
Because this is not the start of the story ;) it is just character test to see how they look like in comparison to the 2d version and very quick render to make it meaningful.
The story will show how did she get pregnant :)

Yes the room does not look that good, but this saves quite some time ;) and later it will move to another location anyway.

 No.37550

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So she came back

 No.37551

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aaa

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For some reason posting without text does not work.

 No.37553

>>37552
Hmmm…looks as though she was popular at school. Another naughty girl from the mind ogf Onix. But, I would be concerned about STDs and would not touch her myself. Perhaps her brother will risk it. Haha!

 No.37559

Very well then, let's see where it goes, although I usually prefer more cute and innocent characters rather than slutty ones, it's not every day that you get to see a baby-eating story, so I'm looking forward to the rest of it.

 No.37565

>>37552
I guess she should be dripping a litle bit…
But otherwise a most interesting character to build a story around.
Can't wait to see what you come up with.

 No.37566

>>37559
But you know Onix. For the same money she will produce an oversized papaerclip!

 No.37567

And then it explodes……

 No.37591

>>37559
:)
I think your characters are also rather slutty because they do not care too much about what is done to them. But my intent is to make more indifferent-sociopathic character than slutty one. As she is not really that interested in sex as she does not care ;)

>>37553
Nice to see that you noticed. Most of my posts are like that where you have something good and bad so that you don't get full satisfaction like in the previous story with the suicidal girl ;)

>>37565

>>37565
>I guess she should be dripping a litle bit…
she is :)
You just can't see it from that angle

>But you know Onix. For the same money she will produce an oversized papaerclip!

It is not really that random.
even if my stories are quite crazy they are quite logical most of the time you just need to make more effort to understand them ;)

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Moving further

 No.37608

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aaa

 No.37609

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aa

 No.37612

File: 1583467579579.jpg (1.66 MB, 1600x1200, Ws 013a.jpg)

She is not that bad after all ;)

 No.37613

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all the sex for today ;)

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She can cook pretty good :)

 No.37615

>>37591
>>I think your characters are also rather slutty because they do not care too much about what is done to them.

Well, I guess if you go by the dictionary definition of slut as a sexually promiscuous girl, that would be correct, but that's not how I would put it…

The thing is, like the same dictionary helpfully suggests, the word slut is a vulgar and often degratory, but as weird as it my sound with me writing such perverted stories, vulgarity and degradation are repugnant for me, and the whole point in my stories is always that nothing that happens has any vulgarity or degradation to it: if a girl lets strangers fuck her as much as they want, she's just being nice, and if she's drenched in swill (I guess the girl in your story is supposed to be drenched in semen? But it kinda looks more like she fell into a dirty puddle) it would be not degrading, showing that she fell too low to care, but quite on the contrary - elevating, showing she's above caring for such things, she's so pure that her purity is so fundamental, it just cannot possibly be sullied.

In this story of yours though it looks like vulgarity and degradation are the intention, or at least that's what I read from the girl's facial expressions. Though there's maybe something somewhat repugnant about her face even regardless of expressions, maybe it's just not the best looking model. But then you even call her a sociopath yourself. You say she doesn't care and my characters don't care either, but that's not exactly the same. My characters might not care about social norms (though really in most of my stories it's just the norms themselves that are different from real world), but they do so when they thing those norms are senseless and obsolete, the characters are in the right and the society is just too backwards. This girl on the other hand looks like she's totally aware it's her who's in the wrong, and it's the fact that she's wrong that she doesn't care about, or even she's purposefully being mean… and it's just hard to like a character like that.
Anyway fundamentally it's all about her unattractive face and vulgar expressions (as it's those that convey her attitude), which makes her look repugnant, though maybe it's a too strong word, but I wouldn't want to hug her and not because of her being physically dirty, but rather… mentally dirty, I guess? While if her mind were pure I would quite the contrary like the idea of a pure hug undisturbed by physical dirtiness.

 No.37616

Hey, guy…if you don't like it then don't read it.

 No.37617

>>37616
Hey, I'm not criticizing (well, apart from the fact that the model could use a more attractive face, but maybe that was the author's intention too, who knows), I'm just explaining my point of view.

 No.37618

>>37616
To elaborate I just made a short comment on how this character is not exactly to my taste (although I still enjoy the story, so I'm going to read it anyway), and since Onix suggested she wasn't dissimilar from my characters, I just elaborated on what exactly makes her dissimilar and not to my taste.

 No.37625

>>37616
>>37615
well, you got it a bit wrong about that degradation and humiliation, as it is not the story intent (I am not into that ) but vulgarity is the intent ;) Although she is not drenched in semen but rather got dirty from being banged on the ground (or another dirty place) or maybe someone peed on her LOL (As this would require unreasonable amount of semen to drench her like that.)
All that humiliation and degradation is here to show that she does not care at all and it does nothing to her which is the similarity to your characters who also do not care to what is done to them.(of course if it was your story she would be some kind of angel LOL and everything would be plain and straightforward)

But I don't say that It is same as your characters I just say that your characters are also slutty in the same way as they allow anyone to do anything to them
More realistically, slut is not a girl who is promiscuous but rather a girl who is into guys who treat her like shit and who is always passive. So this one is not a slut, even if she looks like one at quick glance.


You noticed it right, She is not pure or innocent at all and she is being mean too (but just a little, she is probably nicer than most of the girls you will meet).
Just like in other stories you are given a hard choice to decide if you want to do anything with her at all and should have mixed feelings ;)
But considering that you do not want to hug her, you also show that you are not any better. This is exactly why she is so mean to you as she knows what you think about her. But she gave you a chance to prove her wrong anyway :)

Anyway, she is supposed to be a bad girl in the story so everything is quite right ;)
If she was an angel, like in your stories, this story could not exist


>>37616
>Hey, guy…if you don't like it then don't read it.

He pretty well noticed what I wanted to express in this story ;)
You are not supposed to like everything ;)

 No.37653

> well, you got it a bit wrong about that degradation and humiliation, as it is not the story intent (I am not into that ) but vulgarity is the intent
Perhaps it focuses in vulgarity first, but then from where I stand vulgarity itself is also degrading

> More realistically, slut is not a girl who is promiscuous but rather a girl who is into guys who treat her like shit and who is always passive.

I wouldn't say being passive is a characteristic of a slut. And if you define a slut by being into guys who treat her like shit, I still wouldn't agree that my characters are slutty. First of all, even when someone uses them for sexual pleasure or kills them, in my stories people don't to it to girls because they treat them like shit, it's all just casual fun. And second, I can probably imagine my characters not getting mad at people for treating them like shit, because they're such all-forgiving angels (although I still would probably not write it, because while I like angel-like characters, I wouldn't enjoy the part where they're treated like shit), but not being into such guys. Like how the girls in my Act of True Love story can enjoy the sex with the robbers, but only when they ignore the people and only concentrate on dicks, because those people are still disgusting.

> But considering that you do not want to hug her, you also show that you are not any better.

Perhaps an all-forgiving angel would hug her regardless, but just because I'm not an angel doesn't lower me onto the same level with her, there are more gradations between an angel and whatever you want to call her.

> This is exactly why she is so mean to you as she knows what you think about her.

No, it's the other way around, because I couldn't think anything about her until I knew of her existence, and the moment I knew her she's already mean, or rather vulgar, and it's only after knowing her and seeing her vulgarity that I can start thinking of her one way or another. Cause comes before the effect, not after. And if she's going out of her way to be disgusting, then how can it be my fault if her efforts do work?
I can never understand the logic behind people being mean "because everyone hates them" when in reality everyone only hates them for being mean in the first place.

> If she was an angel, like in your stories, this story could not exist

As I said, there are more gradations between angels and this. And in the guro logic killing a baby doesn't have to equate to being mean or vulgar, and migth as well be filled with love and care. The ability to use such logic is the whole appeal of guro to me, otherwise I could just be watching slasher movies, there's enough of death and blood there, but it's not just about death and blood.

And also as I said, fundamentally it's all about her face, it's not the most attractive in the first place, and the expressions that scream vulgarity only make it worse, kinda defeating the purpose of porn. But if I ignore that, I very much enjoy the story so far.

 No.37654

And also even if a character eats a baby because they're evil, that doesn't need to equate with vulgar and make faces like that. There can be classy and attractive evil too.

 No.37655

And this instead reminds me of some artists who try to draw lolis, but they end up with faces of adult disgusting whores. Only in your case I know you can do attractive loli faces and more appealing expressions too, in fact on the top of my head I can't remember any other character of yours that would look repugnant like this one, which is why I'm so noisy about it in the first place (though initially I only left a short comment but then a discussion raised from that). Perhaps you tried too hard to mimic the looks of the girl from the 2D story yours is based on, and it didn't translate very well into 3D.

 No.37666

>>37653
Well, realistically, in your fiction, you treat people like shit (or worse) too, just casually ;)
(If you can treat injuries and even death like something casual, Why you can't do the same with vulgarity too?)
And they don't mind it at all. If you transfer them into the normal world they would be labeled sluts for sure. They would be constantly serving bad guys and ignoring those who are nice.


>No, it's the other way around, because I couldn't think anything about her until I knew of her existence, and the moment I knew her she's already mean, or rather vulgar.


Not really, because she did not say or do anything vulgar or mean in the beginning just a normal brother-sister relationship which is typically an endless low-intensity conflict. She just came home at night after being raped and you already think bad things about her simply because she is not crying as it should be.
What was more or less my intent :)
Imagine if she had a cute angelic face and came home like that your reaction would be "oh how horrible, poor girl"
but now your reaction is "great, bitch got what she deserves"


>And also even if a character eats a baby because they're evil, that doesn't need to equate with vulgar and make faces like that. There can be classy and attractive evil too.


Actually this is in my other story plan, where eating/abusing babies is portrayed as something cute and innocent.
one picture from that story is here >>28192
This girl does not eat babies she is more like just trolling.
This story would be more fit to be a VN than a plain story. Otherwise, it is not very clear what is happening and it needs multiple endings. Maybe later it can be remade into the game.

>And also as I said, fundamentally it's all about her face, it's not the most attractive in the first place, and the expressions that scream vulgarity only make it worse, kinda defeating the purpose of porn. But if I ignore that, I very much enjoy the story so far.


Consider that character development :) It will get nicer later (although not very much.) So maybe you will start liking them more ;)

 No.37667

>>37655
In other situations I often make contrast between cute character doing horrible things that are totally not expected from such a character.
this time I decided to do something different.

It is good to get a feedback like that because it is hard to tell otherwise if anyone even notices anything, although I think you are overly sensitive to this issue , because I was trying to make her look slightly "repulsive" but only a little, where you would not just fall in love with her but rather have mixed feelings.

 No.37669

Looks like Onix found his match. Now we have two Know it all's battling it out. Yawn!

 No.37670

>>37669
And meanwhile I'm still waiting for that exploding oversized paperclip….

 No.37673

>>37670
This don't hold your breath, this is not going to happen :)

 No.37674

>>37666
> Well, realistically, in your fiction, you treat people like shit (or worse) too, just casually ;)
> If you transfer them into the normal world they would be labeled sluts for sure.
That's what I love fiction for: it doesn't have to abide by the logic of the real world.

> If you can treat injuries and even death like something casual, Why you can't do the same with vulgarity too?

Because when injuries and death happen casually in the stories, that's obviously exaggerated and fully disconnected from reality.
I once wrote a story where a baby is callously killed in order to make it stop crying because it was annoying, and the feedback I got was that it was hard to enjoy because that felt like something straight from TV news, a horrible thing from real life, rather than just a fun work of fiction.
Same reason I would never include drugs in my stories: there are actually people who do them in real world, and now that makes it not fun to read but just disgusting.
Same thing for vulgarity too.

> Not really, because she did not say or do anything vulgar

As I said already, it's not about what she says or does, it's about her face and the vulgar expressions she makes, especially starting from >>37551 as you can see before that I only had problems with the weird looking room.

> She just came home at night after being raped and you already think bad things about her simply because she is not crying as it should be.

> Imagine if she had a cute angelic face and came home like that your reaction would be "oh how horrible, poor girl"
No, you got me completely wrong. I don't want to see her crying at all. I don't enjoy non-consensual stories.
My thing would be if her attitude would be like it was nothing at all, or if it was a casual childish game, or unusual but positive adventure, or like she was nice to people by letting them rape her.
Instead her vulgar face is screaming "I now what I did is despicable and I don't give a shit, look how disgusting I am".

> Actually this is in my other story plan, where eating/abusing babies is portrayed as something cute and innocent.

Well not I'm interested. Would love to see more of that.

> This girl does not eat babies she is more like just trolling.

Wait, she doesn't? Or do you mean she does kill the baby and make a soup of it, but only as an act of trolling with no intention to actually eat it?

> This story would be more fit to be a VN than a plain story. Otherwise, it is not very clear what is happening and it needs multiple endings. Maybe later it can be remade into the game.

Hold on, how long are you indenting to make it to justify making a game out of it? If you want multiple endings, just making each of them in plain pictures with text like this would suffice as long as it's not longer as all of your other stories combined.

> I was trying to make her look slightly "repulsive"

As I said, making porn repulsive is defeating the purpose of porn.
But maybe you just overdid it, or maybe it's me being too picky, just because I know you can make much more attractive characters. If I haven't seen any other works of yours before this one, I'd just assume you can't do any better and sigh "ah, guess this'll have to do until a better artist appear, I guess I'll just focus on the story and try not to look at her face"

> where you would not just fall in love with her but rather have mixed feelings.

Well, I'm certainly having mixed feelings. If I just straight disliked this story, I would just stop reading it, instead of participating in an active discussion.

 No.37703

>>37674
>Wait, she doesn't? Or do you mean she does kill the baby and make a soup of it, but only as an act of trolling with no intention to actually eat it?

well, Just like in this manga she just makes the soup and gives it to her brother so he gets to choose to eat it or not ;)

>Hold on, how long are you indenting to make it to justify making a game out of it? If you want multiple endings, just making each of them in plain pictures with text like this would suffice as long as it's not longer as all of your other stories combined.


This story was inspired by bas999 and ~`TomTheHero`~ content which is focusing on abortions and other baby abuse and there are quite a lot of possible endings.

Making them in plain pictures with text is one of the options but the ending should somewhat depend on the reader's choices or else I don't even know how to explain why it ended in one or another way.

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